Razka

It doesn't look like Bloodghasts are necessary in a deck like this. How are you going to use them? If it's just a low costed creature, there's much better. Black knight for example, or Order of the Ebon Hand, or Phyrexian Crusader.
If you want to keep the ghasts, use a couple Terramorphic Expanse to have more resurrection power.

Second, Demonic Tutor is limited to 1. Don't know if you were aware.

I'd appreciate a comment on my most recent creation:
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=405658

Well, I understand your point, but in that case what's the point of Vapor Snag and Treachery?
As I said, you need a well defined strategy to control the board, you can't simply mix everything.

Pendrell Mists and Propaganda are effective, as well as fade away, but then why would you need the Snag and the creature stealers?
You could increment the mists to 3 and remove Treachery and Snags, so you'd have place for drawing spells.
For a different approach, you could also substitute Boomerangs with Arcane Denial. Sure your opponent draws, but you do as well. And he's probably locked down anyway.

Hope I gave you some ideas

To me, there's no point in having a card like Chimeric Mass. You have no efficient way of having lots of mana, so the Chimera would be a poor choice. Not to mention, you need free mana to counter stuff.

First, replace Chimeric Mass with Invisible Stalker (goes well with Quietus Spike) or Blighted Agent.
Second, you need more card advantage. Ponder and Brainstorm are a good choice, but Divination and cards like that are fine too.

Also, your control is too mixed. Either you bounce creatures, or you steal them. So make up your mind in that sense, because both are incompatible.

I'd appreciate a comment on my most recent creation:
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=405658

I saw Lesbian and I clicked.

THAT PIC IS HOT ASFJFGFJASFA

Good deck BTW.

I like it. You could probably build it in a fashion similar to Megrim decks. Magus of the Jar, Jace's Archivist, and Credit Voucher are all overkill cards. Double the draw, double the fun.
A couple of Bump in the Night could also be useful both for the Ascension and for the Spellblade.

Really clever idea. Kudos

You should narrow the cards down to 60.

I was thinking about this, and for now the only thing I did is to add a bit of ramp. Sure I could add some defensive creature or spell, Wall of Shadows came to mind, but I'm really not sure what to remove here. Sure the main focus would be the "x" cards, but still a single Syphon Soul is a 6 total damage and 6 life gained. That's a lot.

I'll probably try and remove those, even if that feels so wrong. But as you said, it's probably the only way not to be gangbanged.

As for bond of agony don't worry. I have no intention of using it for a cheap win. I know a bit of etiquette lol.

Vengevine could be useful too.
Don't like Primordial Hydra much in a deck like this.

Hey man,
Sorry for spamming decks on yours, but other than the White Essence deck linked in my previous comment, I'd like you to check this multiplayer deck I made. Care to give me some feedback, maybe on both of them?
Thanks!

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=405291

Maybe something with Flying instead of Sunstriker? Like a Serra Angel?

I'd spare a couple Eladamri's Call just in case, and a couple pro equipments like the Argentum Armor in case the game stalls for too long.
Also, Mana Leak as counter, definitely.

I understand. Sorry I couldn't help, but for a standard deck there's really nothing much you can do.

And I completely agree, original decks are what keeps Magic alive. I myself try to experiment a lot as well. But on the other hand, if the stakes are high, like if you're playing on a tournament or something, you might want to go for effectiveness, if you know what I mean,

I like your originality and I hope you keep experimenting like this. :)

Could be a good idea, but Faithless Looting has flashback. You can use it multiple times to increase the storm count, so yeah.
Have you tested it already?

It could work, but you have to be really lucky. Let's say you have 7 cards in hand. 1 grapeshot and 6 mana accels. You storm and do 7 damage, and you're done. You need to have Pyromancer Swath and play it before grapeshot, this way you kill with 21. But again, you rely on luck a lot.

I did something similar, or at least I attempted. I'm not completely satisfied with the result, but I think you might get some interesting ideas out of it.
If you cared to check it out and leave a comment, I'd appreciate that.

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=387707

Second Sight and Tanghart's Glare could make Stolen Goods a bit more reliable.

Awesome deck! To me, this is a white deck done right.
I'm not a fan of "All Knights get xxx", but that's just a pet peeve of mine. For example, I'd manage double strike by having Silverblade Paladins and Mirran Crusader. The crusader is A BEAST.
Gotta love the fact that everyone becomes indestructible. Only problem is, aside from Wrath of God, there's nothing to control the board. I would find place for a couple Disenchant and/or Condemn.
Last thing, I find Enlightened Tutor quite useless in a deck like this. It's not like you absolutely need Privileged Position to win, that for me translates in a waste of space.

If you could check out my "White Essence" deck it would be great. It's my vision of a white deck done right, and it's quite similar to this one. Looking forward to hearing what you think :D
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=387189

I agree, 3 colors are way too many to manage, especially in a fast deck like yours.
That would be quite cool anyways :D
Again, congrats for the awesome deck and for the almost front page.

Agreed, lol.
Kjeldorian Dead is one of my favorite cards, check it out.