Lepellier

Starlit Sanctum for a little more coverage is good.

Incinerate > Volcanic Hammer

Minamo is also illegal in this deck, since it produces blue mana.

Fling. That way you can just fling away that infinitely huge Spitfire, no blocking possible.

Let's begin with you can only have 4 copies of any card (Except for basic lands) in any deck... But I can see where you are coming from with this deck, and you seem to have a decent idea of mana curve down somewhat.

Most of my deck are made to play in the current standard, so voracious dragon and Dragon fodder are out. However, I may throw Ornithopter into the sideboard if needed. I prefer memnite though because of the power.

Error: Karn is not an artifact. He is a Colorless spell, but he is NOT an artifact. However, you can use Mycosynth Lattice and fetch up anything, I believe.

Another good way to go is adding in Kalastria Highborn. Beautiful card when running a vampire sac outlet.

I love the flavor of the deck. Maybe think about Quest for the Holy Relic? Would fit the theme very well.

Sorry, had the wrong card. I meant Crovax, Ascendant Hero.

Well, you have 2x Mirran Crusader and 2x Order of the Golden Cricket, so take out one of each. I'd add in an Ascendant Evincar and maybe another board sweeper

You mention Desperate Ritual in the description, but it's not listed in the deck?

You have 2x Tainted Strike in there.

Drop the statuary's, and he Marsh flats (Add in 3 plains though), You should probably also think about maybe running without the Inkmoths so that you have a more consistant chance of hitting 2 plains on the board. Otherwise, between the Champion and the legionaire, I'd say drop 2 of one and 1 of the other.

Unfortunately, you still have to PAY for Panglacial Wurm if you cast him from your library. Just like if he were in your hand. Or atleast I'm pretty sure, since it doesn''t have "Without paying his mana cost" on the card.

2x Soul's Majesty.

You have Path to Exile in there twice. Maybe replace one with a Swords to Plowshares?

Ok, I take that back a little. With GSZ in there (I missed it first time around, oops) You may want to run Kitchen Finks. They are a little lifesaver in here. I do suggest running maybe a 3rd Melira though.

Drop the Ouphes for 2 more Melira. You NEED to have Melira out there, even id she is a dead draw at some point, you never know when your opponent may kill her.

Arid Mesas are used as deck thinning. They basically serve to pull an extra card out of the deck so that you won't draw that card in a later turn. It also allows you to shuffle your deck fairly regularly.