mcjordalini

less creatures for sure. more mill spells and drawing cards. here's my suggestion
creatures:
x4 Lord of the Unreal
x4 Krovikan
x2 Jace's Phantasm
x2 Hover Barrier

spells/ enchantments/ artifacts:
x4 Tomb Scour
x4 Mind Sculpt
x2 Curse of the Bloody Tomb
x2 Venser's Journal
x4 Dream Twist
x2 Chronic Flooding
x2 Staff of Nin

Wow nice werewolf deck. I haven't heard of Rule of Law. That's an insane card for Werewolves. I would just suggest adding 2 Pyreheart Wolf. They are nice because it makes it harder for your opponent to block. Forces them to loose creatures faster, or lose faster.

I just made a U/B/W Spirit deck. Mind checking it out ? :)
http://www.mtgvault.com/mcjordalini/decks/helpsunblast-spirits-wu/

i love this.

No I have not thought of adding drawing artifacts but I probably should. I am new to fast-drawing. I will have to check those cards you mentioned. Thank you :)

i like it so far

Drogskol Reaver should be your main big creature in my opinion. Try him out if you can.
Sky Spirit is a nice one too.

Thanks doode. Yea Blue/ White is tough to decide what you wanna put in. I spent a great deal of time trying to make this :p

I thought about using more cards to keep creatures tapped, but i will have to look through my cards again, and that is a chore. But I might end up adding black to this deck and adding cards like Dimir Cutpurse, and some Diabolic Tutor's. Maybe some Royal Assassin's, which i have 2 of. anyways ... I will check your decks out. Check my others out too :D

Yea, trial and error of buying cards is rough lol. Sure but it helps build a collection and you get to use them for other decks later :p.

What he said ^ Nocturnus is only good in a monoblack.
If you would like an idea for a fast vampire deck check out mine.

http://www.mtgvault.com/mcjordalini/decks/vampiric-feast-rb/

Nice deck ! I have always wanted to make an Eldrazi deck but they are super expensive. Do you have this deck in real life ?

Faiths Fetters ?
Vampire Nighthawk ?

Nice deck .. I really like Evil Twin. I might wanna try making a White/ Black/Blue spirit and shapeshifter deck.

Check my decks out please ?

I love the samurai cards ... especially the Foxes. Just wish they were a little bit more useful .. All of their effects are pretty much the same. :P But really cool deck, do you run it in real life ?

Ponder, Index, Divination .... Uh, Sorry blanking on drawing cards. But there are lots of cards to help you draw fast. Look at some Blue/ Red burn decks, and Blue/ Black mill decks; they will have examples. Too bad it wasn't a Blue/ Black mill because then you could just use Diabolic Tutors and Revelations.

Also if you can get fast drawing in this deck, a Venser's Journal would help.

But I really like your mill deck, been kinda wanting to make one myself. :p Check my Vampire deck out ? :)

Pretty nice green deck. I run something similar but it has more to it, maybe I will post it. :)

Take a look at Primordial Hydra and consider him. Maybe Protein Hydra as well.

I would add Aura Gnarlid but I don't like that it is tied to Aura's being it's self-buff. Too specific. I like the Thran Golem a lot tho ... Might have to run 1 or 2 of them in the deck ... Only problem is I don't like his 5 cost. I like to keep this deck to a low CMC.

Thanks for the input tho. :) I will take a look at your Elf deck too. I kinda wanted to make an Elf EDH.

basically what everyone else said but i am not going to repeat it ... Just try to pick 1 goal for a deck like YahtzeeNazi has said, make it 60 - 65 cards big and make sure your land-spell ratio is good.

Take a look at my Enchanting Enchantments (G/W) deck on my page. It's a very in depth deck that should give you some ideas on how to design a deck.

I quite enjoy this deck. Been trying to look at Black/ White decks to make my own Black/ White Angel deck and i think a few cards in your deck will be considered. I want to make it very scary. :p Please check out my decks too !

Nice white green deck. I might use some of the cards from use in mine. Check mine out !

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=385891

Yea I thought so. I love Enchanted Evening. It's one of my favorite cards, and when I saw Ancestral Mask on this site, I had to get it.