Boris

You have a lot of cards that return creatures to the top of your library. are you sure you want to clog up the intake of new cards? I recommend adding some copies of death denied. You also might want to add some copies of death baron. I have a zombie deck you might want to look at-

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You might want to add some copies of undead warchief, and maybe death denied instead of disentomb. Definitely get some better kill spells than assassinate.

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I've been trying to edit out the bad ones, but it is very hard to do so. Every card is very different, and it's hard to say one is "better" than another. I don't have trouble running out of useful cards, either, the mulldrifters and numerous other card advantage cards don't allow that. If you have any suggestions, however, I'd very much like to hear them.

This looks like a very amusing deck. Of course, it can't hold up very well against control or burn, but it looks very fun to play, especially in multiplayer. You might want to branch out with noncreatures, as only four of them aren't land fetch cards. Primal command would be a good addition, or maybe plow under. Gaea's anthem and overruns would also be good additions.

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Yes, but the process of discarding cards, and then putting them back on top of your library, then drawing them, is very mana costly for a 2/2 token. It eats up two turns of drawing, 3 mana, and two cards. I would like to think that playing the actual cards is more useful than discarding them, especially two at a time.

This looks very interesting. However, with your mana base, there would be no harm in switching out mana leak for counterspell, or cryptic command if you can afford them. Mystic snake would be a good addition.
I'm assuming you don't care about legality, if so I would swap out the ponders for their better counterpart, brainstorm. Also consider adding Jace Beleren to the deck - He;s one of the best cards in existence to maintain card advantage.

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This looks like a fun deck, but you might get shut down by removal. I recommend adding some protection - plaxmanta, privileged position, and avoid fate or just counterspell are all good candidates. So is mystic snake.

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This isn't really a control deck. If you would like it to me, get rid of ovinize, get rid giant growth and add voidslime and counterspells. You also should consider adding some copies of Simic Sky Swallower.
Aquastrand spider isn't a good card, I would take it out in favor of either cryptic command or pongify.

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Looks decent. You might want to bring the main deck down to 60 cards, though, and jund charm wouldn't be a bad addition.

You might want to expand your noncreature sections. I recommend getting rid of the Gempalm Polluters. They're not a very good card (I know this from personal experience.)
I also agree with Kraven - get rid of Liliana.

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Edit:
Out: 1x Helldozer, 1x Grixis Slavedriver.

In: 1x Unmake, 1x Grave Defiler

this isn't a dream decklist; I have all the cards listed here, and this is the current build.
(Edit: acquired a cryptic command, now in the deck.)

regrettably, I can't get any broken alpha or beta cards, they're way too expensive, although I have been trying to get a few copies of force of will, and they'll go in as soon as I do.

any other suggestions?

This looks compatible, however:
You might want to add some more copies of flame javelin.
and if possible replace volcanic hammers with more incinerates.
The problem I always see with burn decks is they run out of cards. You could add some copies of goblin lore, or maybe orcish cannonade.
Incindiary command wouldn't be a bad addition. Char wouldn't be either.

More creatures would be good. I recommend Flametongue Kavu, and murderous redcap.

You might want to add red for blightning and terminate.
definitely add some copies of thoughtsieze.

If you're not concerned with budget, adding four copies of crypttic command is a very good idea.
definitely expand the noncreatures, and get rid of aquitect's will.

I don't see how this deck can accomplish anything. You have only first turn creatures and single kill.

hmm. this looks sort of incompetent. try to make a 60 card sliver deck with ancient ziggurat.

or, rather than saying that the kill is bad and so is the control tell me why you think so.

how is "consistency" going to help me? it's only there for aesthetic pleasure.

What exactly is wrong with the mana base? I don't have any reflecting pools, but I'm only very occasionally manascrewed in any way either.

control is bad? in what way? I'd like to know. suggestions are welcome.
Kill is bad? again with the consistency thing. the kill spell base is spread out so I don't rely too heavily on one color.

Keep in mind this deck is restricted only by what cards I can get my hands on.

I'd like it if you could elaborate on how this deck is bad so I can fix it rather than just saying it's bad, thank you very much.

Decent list. recommend adding some copies of Countersquall, maybe lich lord or two.

(By the way, "artificial zombie's" shouldn't have an apostrophe. It's not "artificial zombie is.")