Muktol

[[Chronic Flooding]] instead of [[Curse of the Bloody Tome]] maybe. Costs the same but mills 3 instead of 2.
[[Drift of Phantasms]] could also be an option to search for the maniac.
I would also include a counterspell against non-creature spells, like [[Negate]] or [[Spell Pierce]] to protect your Maniac in the last turn against removal.

[[Invigorate]] is banned in pauper:
https://magic.wizards.com/en/game-info/gameplay/formats/pauper

Both creatures only benefit from the one or two spells that you really cast (e.g. [[Maximize Altitude]] + [[Gravitic Punch]]) but not from the copies. [[Wee Dragonauts]] will still get +4/+0 if you cast those two. I think it's still a worthwhile endeavor but not as "over"powered as it first looked.
[[Opt]] as card-draw/ advantage comes to my mind to increase the chance of casting multiple spells per turn.
[[Run Amok]] could also be an option instead of [[Sure Strike]] (Trample vs. First Strike)

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[[Doubling Chant]] and [[Primalcrux]] come to my mind. [[Nacatl War-Pride]] could also be an option as the tokens of this creature are special and do create devotion.

[[Beamsplitter Mage]] (as single creature on the field) + [[Maximize Altitude]] + [[Gravitic Punch]] = 3 damage. With another creature on the field this becomes 6 damage, this is correct. The problem with all the other interactions, like [[Beamsplitter Mage]] + [[Smelt-Ward Minotaur]], is that you need to "cast" a spell to activate the ability. A copy of a spell is never cast but only put on the stack, so e.g. the Minotaur will only activate twice when using [[Maximize Altitude]] + [[Gravitic Punch]].

From the Comprehensive Rules:
706.10. To copy a spell, activated ability, or triggered ability means to put a copy of it onto the stack; a copy of a spell isn't cast and a copy of an activated ability isn't activated.

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The problem with aggressive decks is that they end in topdeck-modus very fast and have to rely on what they draw. Here Viscera Seer shines as it let's you put an undesired card, e.g. a land, on the bottom of your library. I wouldn't use 4 of him in the deck but 2-3could be an option.

[[Perilous Myr]] has one big advantage over e.g. [[Tattered Mummy]], [[Ruthless Ripper]] or [[Vampire Neonate]]: It can serve as additional, most important colourless, removal. [[Undying Evil]] depends on it's usage but here this might be limited. I normally would use it to protect a precious creature from getting killed in combat or due to a removal. The problem here is that only [[Nantuko Husk]] makes sense to use it on as other important creatures will likely have a +1/+1 counter on it. Personally I would remove [[Kjeldoran Dead]] for the Angler as you can't play around the sacrifice ability. You loose a creature that let's you sacrifice something but you gain the ability to use your graveyard as resource.

For instant speed you have [[Tragic Slip]], a very potent removal even able to handle a [[Blightsteel Colossus]] (Outside pauper of course ;) ) and you should have enough sacrifice creatures to activate that morbid when you really need it. So the big question is: Do you really need the instant speed?

One thing that also came to my mind was to replace white as second colour with red to give the deck an extra speed/ sacrifice boost. Or do a second deck with Rakdos colours.

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[[Viscera Seer]] can provide you with a little card advantage by controlling what you draw next. [[Thraben Inspector]] is also a good card for, only drawback is that you can sacrifice him only once. [[Captain's Call]] is a little bit on the high-side with it's cc4 but it provides you with 3 tokens to be sacrificed.
Personally I would change from [[Kjeldoran Dead]] to [[Gurmag Angler]] and use [[Bone Splinters]] instead of [[Final Payment]].
If you need some life-gain consider [[Sylvok Lifestaff]], rescued me some games in my sacrifice deck.

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Muktol

If you want to stick to the theme...[[Knight of Sursi]].

A card overlooked by many Exalted decks is [[Sigil of Valor]], which is basically a cheap [[Sublime Archangel]] you have to equip to benefit from.

6yo at the computer?
I've read that it is intended as a one-drop before I postet the suggestion. The question is if the creator of the deck see's enough advantage/ potential in Edge of the Divinity to have a cc2 creature in the deck over a cc1.

What about [[Mourning Thrull]] instead of [[Vault Skirge]] and [[Edge of the Divinity]] as enchantment?

Lets say you cast a [[Lightning Bolt]] and copy it with a [[Twincast]].
Stack (Top Down): [[Twincast]] -> [[Lightning Bolt]]
Now you use [[Riku of Two Reflections]]'s ability to create a copy of [[Twincast]] and target the initial Twincast with it.
Stack: [[Twincast]] (Copy) -> [[Twincast]] (Original) -> [[Lightning Bolt]]
The copy resolves, targeting the original, creating a new copy
Stack: [[Twincast]] (Copy2) -> [[Twincast]] (Original) -> [[Lightning Bolt]]
The copy resolves again (and so on), targeting the original, creating a new copy
Stack: [[Twincast]] (Copy3) -> [[Twincast]] (Original) -> [[Lightning Bolt]]
To end this infinite loop you have to target the innitial spell, [[Lightning Bolt]] in this case, and end up with basically 3 Bolts in the end.
Stack: [[Twincast]] (CopyX targeting Bolt now) -> [[Twincast]] (Original, targeting Bolt) -> [[Lightning Bolt]]

The main problem here is: Copied spells aren't cast and thus don't count towards storm counter.
From the original rules: 706.10. To copy a spell, activated ability, or triggered ability means to put a copy of it onto the stack; a copy of a spell isn't cast and a copy of an activated ability isn't activated.

Hate to destroy the idea, but this doesn't work as intended.

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Muktol

Personally I would remove [[Sanguine Guard]] for [[Sigil of Valor]], which would also make this deck modern legal. I also would replace/ sideboard [[Highborn Ghoul]] with e.g. [[Bearer of Silence]] or [[Heir of Falkenrath]] as intimidate is a rather weak sort of evasion in my opinion.

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Muktol

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Cardnames with an apostrophe in it ( like [[Abuna's Chant]] ) won't work properly. I also think that this only works in the comments and not in the description part.

[[Kaijin of the Vanishing Touch]] and [[Echoing Truth]] maybe?

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[[Boros Reckoner]] could be a modern-legal replacement for [[Mogg Maniac]] and [[Wall of Essence]] for [[Wall of Hope]].
If you're using mass-removal in combination with creatures like [[Hornet Nest]] then some haste-buffs like [[Burst of Speed]] or [[Emblem of the Warmind]] could help you to take advantage of the situation.
[[Keen Sense]] let's you draw a card whenever one of your creatures deal damage to an opponent...not combat damage but ANY damage! [[Ripjaw Raptor]] could also be an option to draw cards when your opponent attacks.

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Muktol

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Personally I always use [[Rune Snag]] over [[Mana Leak]].
[[Last Thoughts]] can give you some card-advantage, [[Thieves' Fortune]] could also be an option if you want to stick to the rogues/ unblockable. [[Phyresis]] could be a nasty surprise for your opponent especially with [[Inkfathom Witch]] + [[Stinkdrinker Bandit]]. [[Whispersilk Cloak]] would also be an option to provide your creatures with some protection, tough making them not target able by [[Stinkdrinker Bandit]]'s ability and further slice spells.
The only creatures profiting from [[Tetsuko Umezawa, Fugitive]]'s ability is Tetsuko himself and [[Stinkdrinker Bandit]]. Personally I would use another 2-4 counterspells or unblockable creatures like [[Dimir Infiltrator]] or [[Tormented Soul]] instead.
As sideboard option I would suggest [[Echoing Truth]] which can make quick work of token/ swarm based decks

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Muktol

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I'm missing a deck and how-to play description.
Most equipment decks tend to try to be as fast as possible so [[Armory of Iroas]] is not a real good equipment in my opinion.
[[Trusty Machete]] can be replaced with [[Bonesplitter]]. Costs one mana less to equip but brings one toughness less, which can be ignored as your main beaters have first/ double strike.
I would also remove/ sideboard [[Brass Squire]] for one reason: How often does the situation you described ("gets killed before combat on my opponent's turn") happen? If this doesn't occur once or twice each and every game then it's a dead card with (nearly) no use. Yes, you can play and equip e.g. a [[Loxodon Warhammer]] instantly on turn 3/4 but you need to equip at least 2 of them to a creature to make it worth the mana-costs of [[Brass Squire]]. If you want an alternative for the squire you can take a look at [[Etched Champion]] (which isn't budget at all), [[Ardent Recruit]], [[Auriok Glaivemaster]], [[Kor Duelist]] or similar creatures. If you fear the chance of your creature getting removed then [[Swiftfoot Boots]] (again not budget), or [[Mask of Avacyn]] could be of interest to you.
You could also take a look at the following cards: [[Cranial Plating]], [[Darksteel Citadel]] and [[Dispatch]].

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Muktol

[[Cloudshift]] and/ or [[Ghostly Flicker]] to protect/ reuse your splicers could be an idea.