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Adding Brightstone Ritual and Boggart Shenanigans seems like a good fit. Goblin Charbelcher could work well too.

Drop at least two of each piece of the Kaldra set. Add 4 Stonehewer Giant. Add in some more knights/soldiers like Auriok Glaivemaster, Leonin Den-Guard and Leonin Skyhunter. Also add in some cheap equipment like Leonin Scimitar and Bonesplitter. Drop the Steelshaper Apprentices as Steelshaper's Gift does the same thing more efficiently.

Wow, someone can't take criticism very well. If you want a legal infinite damage deck check out my curious kobold storm II deck. Feel free to leave comments and critiques.

Tinker is restricted so you can only play one. You only have one Fireball and Rolling Thunder and Mox Lotus isn't even a legal card.

Trade Strafe out for Lightning Bolt and add a copy or two of Smoke dropping two mountains. Simian Spirit Guide is another possible addition.

I don't think Pariah and Sandskin work together. Sandskin prevents combat damage, Pariah would be dealing the damage to the creature. Also I would add in a cheap 1 mana creature like Tundra Wolves to use Griffin Guide on.

Add 4 X Tundra Wolves. I have a similar deck but it also contains Wolf-Skull Shamans and Wren's Run Vanquishers.

Where is the beatdown? Not enough creatures, get rid of burnt offering first off with so few creatures. Only 4 flyers and this is called flying beatdown? Horrible, start over.

Add Smoke.

Drop the Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoths for Peppersmokes.

Add some Stonehewer Giant(s)

I would drop the red mana since you only have two red cards in your deck, Terminate. Adding a copy or two Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth, 1 more festering gobling, 4 zombie Cannibals and some Dark Rituals will help as well. 4 Korlash, Heir to Blackblade would be nice but they're very expensive.

You would not have to sacrifice Call to the Grave or any zombies.

Why do you have chromatic star and darksteel ingot if you're only playing red? Add a little direct damage or a mudslide since all your creatures fly. Anothe rmoutain or two would probably help.

Check out my Curious Kobold Storm 2 deck. This is pretty close to it but a little less synergy.

I would add Zombie Cannibal(s) and Dark Ritual(s) for the early game and a copy or two of Call to the Grave. Other addtions could be Gempalm Polluter and demon's horn.

Stonehewer Giant + Kaldra equipment replacing Raksha, Jareth and Konda's Banner. You can also ditch the Steelshaper's Gift with Stonehewer Giants in deck for 4 other spells.

This deck is all over the place. What's the point of Urza's Incubator with so few creatures all different types? Why spellbook if you have no card drawing engines? Why would you play Mycosynth Lattice either? Unless you were going to shattering spree their stuff. I could beat this deck with vanilla 1/1 and 2/2 creatures by the time you have anything on the board.

You can add zombie master and urborg, tomb of yawgmoth now that the master is a zombie adding call to the grave is fun too. Zombie cannibal is also a good cheap zombo.

Actually I would have to say 2 Bogardan Hellkites coming into play would be best.

I think Lief is talking about Pariah or Pariah's Shield.