Chewrida

Maybe switch out form of the dragon for something like slagstorm?

Trash for treasure would be a good mix to this deck in case bronze bombshell gets into a graveyard and you don't have an endless whispers out. ... Also Yawgmoth Demon would work really well, If it's on your side you can still use it without having too much worry about tapping it, and if an opponent has it, chances are that they will have to tap it and it will deal damage to them.... Really cool idea for a deck tho

You should take out either 1 or 2 natures claim for another 1 or 2 giant growth

You should put in an ulamog, so you have each titan

Yea, I like the idea of the citidel, especially mixed with worldslayer. Although I was leaning towards vault of whispers instead. Not sure which yet, either way I'll have to see if anyone I know has some they can give or trade me.

Thanks =p

Yes I have actually, I own this deck. It's really fun to play and works essentially how I want it to. But I'm always looking for suggestions of improvement. The opponent generally doesn't know what to do when you drop token bombs like springjack shepherd and then cloudshift it... obviously other than a field wipe

You should have 4 vampire nighthawks, I would say take out all the wolfir and put in 2 nighthawk and 1 more thrill kill assassin... Also I would make room for those desecration demons you have in your sideboard to put into your main deck =p... cool deck tho, deathtouch is pretty mean

You should take out spirit link and add in something like ajani's pridemate or serra avatar...or even like a breath of life or something, but Spirit Link seems pretty useless in this deck, as all your creatures already have lifelink other than martyr of the sands which will be sacrificed anyhow. I would recommend ajani pridemate, Having more creatures couldnt hurt.

Battle hymn is something to look into

seething song, pyretic ritual, rite of flame, curse of bloodletting, furnace of rath, lightning bolt..... look into those, Only running x spells will be too slow, you need stuff to compliment it....Maybe even fire servant

Is this standard, if not, you should def. add dark ritual, it would help you drop out your creatures alot quicker

I like decks like these, they are pretty fun to play, but you should bank more on your creatures being sacrificed, have quicker methods and better ways for them to leave play, I would drop harvest pyre and mark of mutiny for sure.

If you want any more ideas for your deck, I have one that runs a self sacrifice concept, check it out.

http://mtgvault.com/chewrida/decks/selfsacrifice/

You should put in a play set of steel overseer, That way you have more than one way to win, and you have plenty of artifacts to make steel overseer a very scary card.

If you wanted a token preventative, look into echoing truth, it destroys token decks =]

Also you have a lot defenders so check out doorkeeper =]

Have you thought about adding Psychosis Crawler?

Also I would Highly recommend adding in lightning bolt, if you're running a red deck it's the most useful card you can have.

No doubt, well cool deck idea still =] I really like personal sanctuary. I would had added more creatures to mine like spitemare, and balefire liege, but I went for field destruction and damage so stuffy doll is pretty much the only creature worth adding

Check out my spellshock lockdown deck, It runs the same mechanic you do for this deck =p

Try adding smoke, its a great card for a deck like this =] or really any planeswalker would be nice

Why is Enchanted Evening in here?

Nemesis Mask would be devastating on Phyrexian Obliterator =] I really love phyrexian obliterator, maybe throw in undying evil to give obliterator a slight removal protection or make so you can block a big creature and he not die =p

understandable, I do love the land returns haha