Voron

Add "Seaside Citadel" for better mana ;)

Besides that... it's a nice deck!!!

5 color ally decks are slower then you think, even with cards like harrow or the leyline, and 9 mine for the Rite just doesn't really work. I've a lot of experience with Allies, and I can tell you that 3 colors is the most you should use.
Here are two examples of some other Ally decks:
Bant: http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=96288 (works by stalling until you can cast the Ultimatum, still rather slow, but it does have a lot of weenie creatures)
Jund: http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=143327 (a lot faster and more powerfull, but no control/special allies)

Try using fling, and cheap +X/+0 enchantments.

Imo, replace the "Copper Myr" with "Silver Myr", and I'm curious about how you are going to use "Shimmer Myr"?

I only miss "Venerated Teacher" & "Champion's Drake" in this deck, although the second isn't that important.

Try using proliferate to get more level counters ;)

Is it me or do you miss cards with cascade? They are the best to use with Galvanoth, and try adding a "Paradox Haze".

Galvanoth+Cascade+Paradox Haze = >4 Free Spells even before your turn starts ;) (and if your lucky you can even cascade into Galvanoth himself)

Momentary blink clears your creatures from any level counters, don't forget that. Try using a card with Proliferate, that way your creatures lvl up for free :)

What about "season of the witch"? Haven't seen your previously versions, but forcing your enemy to attack you each turn might be a good thing here :D

Try using "Myr Turbine" to look for the right myrs!

Ow! And maybe try looking for a card (tutor maybe) that can search out Doubling Season ;)

I know you don't want to focus on counters, but have you thought about "Mycoloth"? Even if you devour only 2 other tokens, "Mycoloth" gets 8x +1/+1 counters thanks to "Doubling Season". And because of "
Doubling Season" you get 16 Saprolings tokens every turn!!!!!

Nice deck! I only miss cards like "Kuldotha Rebirth" (+some 0-cost artifacts) or maybe a Goblin Assault (+Contested War Zone is one hell of a combo)

Looks good! I only miss cards like Fist of Ironwood, more food and gives trample! :D

Here's my Devour deck, it might give you some inspiration:
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=108212

(and Mycoloth + Doubling Season = epic awesomeness! Double counters and double tokens!!!)

I've played this deck for a while now...but I've never thought about adding the Vivid lands...that could speed up this deck A LOT! Thanks!

One card I'm missing is "Teysa, Orzhov Scion". Her ability to create/recycle creatures and removal ability are second to none and she's a perfect partner for the council.

I hope this is an EDH deck with 2 cards to much... or else you really need about...40cards less?

Ooh! Fluffy/story telling decks <3 You don't see many of those! <3

Try using 'Time Sieve', it produces unlimited turns with 'Thopter Assembly'... although you might have to much thopters already to pull it of?

Here are some other cards you might find good to use:
-Totem-Guide Hartebeest
-Evershrike
-Nomand Mythmaker