vitorocks03

nice hope it works let me know the standings! also if you want the fumes in ditch bonhoard.. BUT sideboard it...

Take out 2 fumes.. and 1 clasp *if you want bonehoard in...*
i would do 3 of either adaptive automan or 3 mayors. you should choose if you want a 2$ card for cmc of 3 or a 5$ card that has a cmc of 2

if you know its cheap cmc but not the price but another card does the same but 1 or 2 cmc higher than the other card... go for the cheap $$ ... it helps.. and now look only a few bucks over but hey! i was close to a 100$ deck! lol

@sure
I had repsect for him before but you dont just go to someones deck and start bashing it... that is what he has been doing to mine and now kamakazi? this dude has some nerve. He didnt start helping with advice until someone gave him permission. and I do know a thing or two about the mechanics of building a competitive deck. I do see some of his points but when you keep telling people douchie comments then that is wrong. I do give helpful advice. Now for this deck he should only have 60 cards. BUT it was not going to go into a PTQ or Worlds. he was only going to FNM and if he wanted to go with 65 then let him. I do know that the % is different when you set 65 to 60... but also remember this when you shuffle it is a very different when you shuffle 60 to 65. there is 5 more spaces that are being shuffled...

next i am not narrow minded like i said above he started going after my deck first being a douche... and everytime you comment you give 3 extra likes *even if you dont like the deck* and if he doesnt like a deck then why would you put nonsense advice? i do not like the 3 comment thing when you add a comment. i feel like you should earn that players like.

and i did not go through all of his decks only his last 3.. and i am only being an ass because he is telling people to put cards in their deck that does not really need to be there.

sometimes i say something that should be in a deck but i correct myself if i rethink what i told them was wrong.

im not trying to be the asshole on the vault. i really like it and it helps me when i am puzzled with one of my decks.

Did you see some of the comments he put on others decks? look into it. i know your an admin.

Thanks bro!! that meant alot!

hmm lets see Technically Tezzeret's Gambit is blue BUT you dont even half to add one single island for him...not even a dual. it is a 3[newphy U] and in that expansion the newphy cmc can use Blue *island* or your life [which is 2 dmg to you].....

I would highly consider it BUT you dont need to in all reality.

lets start with each creature for the deck
Plaguemaw Beast- Good card yes. cmc is 3gg [so 5 total]. it is a 4/3 with a taping effect that states "sac a creature and then proliferate" awesome card... so what creatures will you be sacrificing?

Angelic Overseer- best card for any human deck period. i would have 3 of

Champion of the parish- one of the best 1 cmc drop you can have in a humans deck. i would add 4 of for him.

Doomed Traveler- yet a great addition to your ranks for a low 1 cmc drop card it produces an extra creature after your guy either dies OR gets either DOJ-ed or BSZ. good card.. 3 or 4 of

Mentor of the Meek- 2w cmc. 2/2 human.. effect draw power. i would scrap him all together. My opinion is that when he is out people forget him and when they do get him out he really doesnt produce that sort of drawing you want. like i said up above if you want drawing power and a way to buff all your guys, Tezzeret's Gambit. a draw two and poliferate seems pretty awesome in my book.

Mikaeus, the Lunarch- awesome card. love that he is [x]W but remember this, If you put him out there for a cmc of 5 that means he will have 4 counters on him. lets say we were playing both humans yours against mine. ill beast within him or 0-ring him. because i dont need him to do a creature based poliferate for all his buddies. he is a great card if you have the back up for him *like blue because of the countering ablities* then he is just a waste of 6$. and if you have multiples then that is 6*x=y....so if anything 1, or none.. that will be your choice :)

Elder of Laurels- Great mana ability. but isnt there a green spell that does the same? or close to it? how about wreath of geists. its an enchant for G cmc of 1 and that creature gets +x/+x for the number of creature cards in your yard. i would add 3 of

Hamlet Captain- cool card in love with that samuri looking dude. keep...

now enchants you have.
Asceticism- Awesome! its a good way to be hexproof for sure. but is it worth the 5cmc for it? well you are going for a mid/late game. i would still consider it.. even if it is in the sideboard...

0-ring- keep 4 of ...or 3 of... what ever makes ya sleep more at night knowing your ass wont get messed up by a wurmcoil or a titan! lol

Land: up it to 23.. add razorverge thicket.

spells:
add 3 of the choking fumes. that one extra will help
Travel Preparations- Great card keep it! but throw it down to 3 of.

And artifact speaks for itself.

Now for some other cards to add:
Mayor of avabruck try your damn hardest to not have him flip.. which will be easy. gives your humans +1/+1 add 3 of him...

Add Grand Abolisher. Even thought you have hexproof with asceticism that doesnt mean that you wont get guys countered. it helps against Solar Flair very much. at least 2 of.

Add Fiend hunter he is a creature and a creature o-ringer. epic card!

MANA EXCEL! Avacyn's Pilgrim nuff said...4 of...

and dont forget my man Mirran Crusader. He is expensive but look at the possibilities with him. pro to green and black, and has double strike *attacks twice before inital damage calculation comes in play.* add 2 or 3 of him....

add some Beast within or naturalize... i prefer you do beast within because if your opponent has kessig wolf run, inkmoth, a planeswalker, or a big fatty turning them into a 3/3 beast isnt as bad as some people think....

also consider for SB Ghost Quarter... 3 of....



I really went into some detail with ya about how to make your cards work together and how they should flow with one another. this deck shouldnt be no more than 100$ and minimum 60$. if you want some real fun add gideon jura in there and hero of bladehold.

now these are only my opinions and what not....
Vito.

actually DoJ will destroy your creatures.. DoJ does not target any creatures ... it is a global board wipe.. and hexproof states:Hexproof (This creature can't be the target of spells or abilities your opponents control.)... doj is not targeting a specific creature *it would say destroy Target Creature if it was like doom blade...*

damn bro. what place did you get then?

ahahahahahahaha what a bitchy move bruh. +1 and 3 more!!!!

phantasmal image? liliana of the veil? Think twice? i like your way your going...anew into a big mo fo... but you know that phy metamorph and phntasmal image can copy them? great cards...

Instead of dissipate *which is a good card yes* i would add Green sun zenith in its place but wait!!! only 2 of GSZ... cause you need thrun! wrecks anyone's day...

um yeah that is good

Now this is so much better! im serious.. i also like that you took out all your snappys... one thing i would suggest tho.. no think twice... use ponder... alot better and you can choose what card you wish to draw..

ya originally it was going to be R/U but decided na.. have not changed it yet....

and i do know were your coming with that... what would you do differently? i dont want to completely copy kami's deck... that isnt right.. all i want is someting i can play at fnm and do decent.. since this is a pretty cheap deck..*lets keep it going that way too*

really solid proformance bruh. wish i had some crit. but thats ok tho.. gl at fnm yall

not really.. i have all the cards shown above.. played it all night with some guys... yeah, its solid

seriously If you dont want bad decks being on the main page then quit fucking commenting on their decks. and maybe all these "bad" decks and "bad magic players" will not be on there. Maybe you should show us up and make a REAL deck for standard mister pro.. Just because people dont have Mox opal in their deck and Wurmcoil and SoFaF doesnt mean the deck sucks.. and now your saying going 65 is pointless... not really... People should try to stay at the minimum but like this deck which is pretty fucking awesome, doesnt need to worry if he is over 65..because he has 0 cmc with his probe... sucks he has to lose life.. but hey... i would take it if its going to be my winning card...

oh looked at your recent decks... only 1 had wurmcoil.. thought that was a bamf card.. shouldnt it be 4 of in all your decks??? cause your a pro and all...

agreed with the ^^^^^^

I would also request you take out half your snappers... they are not great for the deck whats so ever.... to be honest its not great for standard... i dont know why people say its good in standard.. if you really want something back from your yard i would add 4 of *insert card*....no point to spend 120$ on 4 cards that are useless.. they were made for legacy really... and i bet it will be banned in a few months...

so you have 4 more cards to play with.. maybe add some more green in there... like beast within instead...

Take out the infect... does not belong... add green for ramp. you will be ok with that... especially if you want to play ludvic... just sayin... and 2 prim tits... so you should have 4 rampant growth 2 birds, and 2 tits... and the tits wont hurt your mana curve really because you should be utilizing your mana excel/ramp

dude lets be honest, you should have done fine... Its easy to forget that hey even tho its changed it will still be great.. i had great people from all over the world help me on this deck and they all spoke english for once! lol

lol i love it when people mess up..even i do and when i see i did i lmao