vaan104

adding shocklands would be a good way to go with the fetches, overgrown tomb, blood crypt, and stomping ground just a couple of each should be good

nice card/ idea how about spirit bonds? twilight drover would work great

http://www.mtgvault.com/vaan104/decks/vampire-edh-2/
my r/b vamp edh
I think you should add a few more red vamps that give you counters
rakish heir might be a good 1

1st strike deathtouch is never useless glissa's abilty for artifacts doesn't matter

maybe drop imperious perfect and add 2 ezuri, renegade leader and 2 overrun
immaculate magistrate is awesome to

ya I wish I had mana drain lol I have a magic addiction but ive still never spent more then $50 on a card and that's because I had to have an emrakul
do you use Skype? you should join the mtg chat we have and some of us play on cockatrice
look me up on Skype at vaan104

http://www.mtgvault.com/card/tamiyo-the-moon-sage/AVR/
that 1 might be good to
and Chandra, the firebrand might be better for edh
and jace, architect of thought might be better for edh
as for what to take out mana leak is pretty weak for edh and do you own a mana drain? gut shot is weak to
you also need some card draw like mind's eye or angelheart vial might be perfect for this deck

drop 2 eldamri and add 2 glissa, the traitor id also use go for the throat over hero's downfall since its faster and putrefy over eyeblights.
I made this b/g elf deck awhile ago you should look at it
http://www.mtgvault.com/vaan104/decks/bg-elves/

u should atleast add some planeswalkers then. any of the Chandra's would be good

unless you play this 1 vs 1 it probably wont win u need some creatures heartless hidetsugu would be a big 1 then some haste creatures and maybe some creatures with the prowess ability

you should have monastery swiftspear in here

fate unraveler and teferri's puzzle box you might want to look at. I made a deck like this once.
http://www.mtgvault.com/vaan104/decks/draw-to-death/

I think u need more infect creatures 10 creatures in edh just isn't enough then id add volrath's stronghold

feast of blood might be better for you then go for the throat

whip of erebus might be good

there was a goat deck on the hot pg once this 1
http://www.mtgvault.com/egotines/decks/the-goat-deck/

its expensive but Liliana of the veil would be good

maybe use cartel aristocrat?

with this deck you will be dead before you can play anything you cant run that many high mana cards and only 16 land

drop force of will you wont be buying it