Have you considered splashing blue to counter things like Burn?
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Without the Verdant Catacombs and Fulminator Mages this is pretty inexpensive for an alternative. How early are you able to pull off the combo with this?
Isn't this literally just the Magic Origins Intro Pack copied and pasted? I mean, I guess if nothing else it shows how much you can build this for yourself... but you can pick up this deck in your local Walmart for $16.
Looks fun to play, one of the local FNM events held is pretty casual -- maybe I'll build this and run it there just for some fun!