swimmininja

I thank you for your comments and suggestions, but all of the cards you mentioned were nonstandard. I use this deck in real life, and hav access to all standard cards, so i cannot add those cards. But thanks for the tips!

Ok i see a few problems in this deck. Me, as a tournament player made many mistakes as i first started.

First, there are to many "1" creatures and spells. That is to be seen in first decks.

Second, I must complement on the use of 1 and 2 mana spells. My first deck had over half the deck 6+ mana.

I cannot give you any other advise unless you tell me something: is this a real life deck? Please tell me soon.

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First thing, you hav too many of "1" cards. I would base this off nizzetmizzet, so add cards that allow you to draw cards so you can deal damage. I would add fleeting distraction to draw cards, amd use other cards similar to that. Look at my new artifact overrun, that has won in a $80,000 tournament!!

This is also a tournament qualtiy deck. Great combos together. Check out my artfact overrun deck for another tournament quality deck

I enjoy your deck very much. I hav a tournment quality artifact token deck, called artifact overrun. Fell free to leave comments on it and to take cards from it.

You say this tournament quality, but it isnt. You hav no way to deal damage, not very many ways to mill, and not very many ways to control. Look at my artfact overrun deck, amd youll see tournment quality deck. Ive won $80,000 tournaments with that deck.

I love it. Other then the need for lands. Pretty well thought out. I would find some way to deal damage to the player after you gain all that life. I suggest adding Sorin, Lord of Innistrad for tokens and life gaining. Im sorry for my little base of cards, due to me starting to play magic when dark accension was out. I also dont play black a lot, so i do not know many black cards.

I edited my artifact deck, and would like your comments. I did not add the wild hunt dude due to him not being standard, and im hoping to make the artifact deck a irl thing. Look at some of my other decks to comment on them

I thank you very much for the comments. I will change it and let u no about the change by giving a thought about one of your decks. Im working for all standard, so ill see about those cards. Thanks again

Lol we all have the perfect combos we wish to do. This is very much based on that. And i forgit about countering spells. Whoops. I really dont care about comments about this deck b/c it was a for fun deck. Thanks for the thoughts

Dude. This is a well thought out deck. I very much wish i could've thought it out, but you beat me to it. Please look at my Artifact Overrun deck. Very similar, but different way to win.

i luv elf decks, with there being so many elves there are many combos out there. check out my elf deck "Arbor Day" to see my many different elves!

i like this deck with dual color creatures. I really like double strike.

you should add a slytherix, the blight dragon. i luv that infect card. also, take out... o nvr mind you have inkmoth nexus. great deck!

I luv that combo. Check out my Vigor Joraga Warcaller combo in my Arbor Day deck

I would add spirit mantle to attach to prized unicorn so it doesn't die and then you can attack with every thing else. Check out my decks and comment on them!

Oh didn't know that. And any way, i can get your really strong and awesome cards.

I like that combo to. Helps you gain life and keep people off your back. But what happens if Day of Judgement comes into play?

Well this is ok but you need to add some cards that say proliferate. I died b/c of cards with proliferate. I like this though very much.

I see your idea in this deck. Continuously copy creatures and untapped more and more and more. I like that. But I don't think this would hold up in a tournament. It says exile at end of next end step.mthat gives you very little leverage creature wise. I could see how you think this is a tournament quality deck though. It could be but would be very hard to win later on as you play people who have played for years.

Thanks for the tips, this is not really my deck, I'm just takin care of it for my friend. I'm not allowed to change it. I'll make a deck similar to this but with my own changes soon.