This is very good. Nice job!
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Looking much better! From here you can try to whittle away the unneeded cards until you're at 60, because at 60 you maximize your chances of drawing any one card.
Four Elvish Mystics. I only have two. Need. More. Mystics. For. Mana.
This looks decent. I would recommend trimming the deck down to 60 cards and using more creatures that have an ability that contributes to the graveyard control theme.