first problem, too many cards. second, way too much mana cost. dump all the 5 or higher mana cost cretures. granted you have a huge mana maker in one of your enchanments, but you only have 1. Basically, you need a token ramp. overrun your opponents with small tokens and just run rampant.
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lemme know if theres any suggestions to speed up the creature boost in here. dont want to stray from the artifact tyranny but definitely need more creature help here.
if you run this in standard, youre going to be screwed if you run into a tezzeret deck due to you dont get to play anymore after turn 7 with all the artifact mana production and paradox engine. need artifact hate in here.