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well for a start most decks have 60 cards so there is plenty of space for new cards, for a start try think of a theme for your deck, if you look at a few more decks on this site you should get a picture of what themes can be built on best. Next you should work to identify which are the most effective cards for you theme and get 2, 3 or 4 copies of these cards. Having multiple copies of you better cards makes your deck more consistent and therefore better.

Oh but you have an answer for creature heavy decks with more removal in your side deck didnt see that

Looks like a solid vampire deck that should be able to compete nicely, though it does have less removal than alot of the vampire decks I have seen, however I'm hardly a vampire deck specialist.

I'm liking the idea of this deck, looks like a tough one to play against. Good balance of low cost creatures to pay the cost of the Eldrazi monument also the creatures seem to gel together really well with the use of some of the most powerful allies.

Impossible to predict it depends what sort of deck you are up against

Perhaps add a few coppies of Kor Spiritdancer if you can to make the most of them

You could use the enchantment training grounds in this deck, as it could be beneficial to lower the cost of leveling your creatures up

Also you seem to be playing blue who typically benefit a more control deck style. If you add in a few counter spells like cancel, deprive, mana leak it could benefit you by stopping your opponents.

If you get 4 of each of your best cards then take out the worse ones you will have a greater chance of drawing the good cards

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Yeah, It is starting to look a lot better, you might want to seek out a more experienced player than me for advice on which specific cards to use.

Is there anything you might suggest if i were unable to get hold of clone?

Hey, for a start, most decks tend to use 3 or 4 of the same cards, try not to have only one of any card because this will mean that you are very unlikely to actually draw many of your cards. Also you should try cutting the size of your deck down so it is closer to 60 cards. Cutting out the less useful cards will help you to draw the better cards more frequently when playing.

Another thing, do you think it would be worth throwing a few Into the Roils into the deck?

yeah i expect my local store should stock most of this at a reasonable price

Gdgd, thanks for all your help, i am alot happier with the general look of the deck now compared to before, i just need to buy enough of some of the cards to make this now lol

Ok what do you think to the new deck design, better?

I never looked at it that way and i guess you can apply the same logic to the pacifisms

my main problem would then be the absence of Pacifism and a way to get rid of enchantments, unless you can suggest some good blue alternatives?

Sounds like a plan, but i'm not sure which other cards to drop? Also do you think Calcite snapper would be of any use to fend off early attacks as the deck gets going?