Intruder Alarm rox like hell!
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Bloodmark Mentor is a great card in any red creature deck. Still I miss the Nova Chaser in your deck. You can give her Haste and First Strike = Awesome. Maybe add Incandescent Soulstoke??? Could boost the elementals. Brute Force would also be a great boost. Replace the Banneret with Smokebraider. They speed up your first rounds much better. Ceaseless Searblades will also improve with them. Heartlash Cinder should be replaced. Soulbright Flamekin would work perfektly with Ceaseless Searblades and Flamekin Brawler. Inner-Flame Igniter are too expensive. You wont need its first strike ability, you have Bloodmark Mentor and Kindled Fury. Roar of the Crowd is too slow and expensive. Always consider Incinerate or Rift Bolt.
Awesome rat massing but could have problems against black
Jitte is the most aweful card in the world. I hate people using it because it works in all decks. No matter how good or bad it is. And combining 3 Jitte with that many planeswalker isnt a good idea too. Add more creatures and counterspells.
Yes, thats the ultimate zombie collection. You should reduce your spells. You have already 72 cards and thats too much. Im not sure if you even need white mana at all. Tideholloe Sculler isnt worth it. Still awesome zombie combination.
You need Rite of Flame still good but risky against black (terror)
good deck, i have a similar one you should add some enchantment/artefact killers and replace basic lands with some dual color non basic lands
you have good cards - but your deck is expensive and slow -> use less big creatures / maybe change deck into a (green/red) dual color deck. - also in your early game you have a very weak defence -> replace Ashenmoor Gouger and maybe Nova Chaser - no instant spells?