cut the lotus petal, the riot spikes, the necromancy, and 2x anthem add a swamp and 4 ashenmoor gougers ( a cheap, easy beater, esp. with liege. and he PWNS with fists) replace necromancy with 3xtorrent of souls (better, less confusing) and a mountain replace dark rituals with 2x land and 2x damnation it'll make you extended feel free to disregard any of these comments....but you do need the gougers and some sweepers...
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A. you have very few lands. ina deck based on throwing down huge amounts of mana...I'm surprised. I'd say go up by 5 (dual lands are awesome, read last point) B. people do use wrath of god. add some mana leaks to stop early beaters. C. continuing on that above point, often you just can't get your creatures to stick. maybe splash red with 4 fireballs and 2 molten estructions? lets you use mass removal, and, with your loads of mana, can easily take the game D. Great deck! original; very good
you have some good cards, but you're making the mistake a lot of inexperienced players make: too few of too many cards. at least your deck is sixty, but you need some muiltiples. you seem to have a curve, but you are probably not going to draw it too often. my first deck looked almost exactly the same, but it was white, black, green. but you make the same mistake: not enough multiples and way too few lands overall, a very good first effort.. add more lands and some terramorphic expanses
cut terramorphic expanse, its designed for splashing/multicolour ona budget
its all commons
HEY, you're right! i forgot about those!
drop incinerates for inversion drop two boggart birth rites for boggart shenanigans
drop the bookburnings, add two siege gang commanders drop the kindles and add a pair of piledrivers, a browbeat, and a clickslither
DUDE, THAT'S UBER!
if this is a control deck you need some more counterspell-age, and maybe 2-3-4 wraths because your curve is rather high and the deck is a little slow. Two or Three of each vivid land, as otherwise you will have very few sources of coloured mana for the shadowmoor dual land. but otherwise, that is great. If you own this, that's impressive
cackling flames is rather smelly demon jester is so-so you do, however, need 4 ashenmoor gougers, and consider some demogods, even if they don't fit the theme. but definately the gougers, maybe the demigods (ups your curve) Cut cackling flames, gobhobbler rats, and nettling curse, add another demonfire, another guildmage, 4 gougers, and 3 avatars of discord. and consider some killsuit cultists for cheap sacraficial goodness.
i totally agree about the hybrid thing that makes it easier to play, not harder, so it should be at the curve, not over and ridiculously uber looks good
astral slide, silly you NEED 4
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there we go i don't like ballonist...i have serras embrace for offensive flying and kjeldoran royal guard to defend againts unblocked flyers i don't want the banneret. i thought about it, but i have very few generic mana costs and its low on lands, but my highest converted mana cost is 4, and very few 4s at that The side deck is to protect against monocoloured, artifact-enchantment heavy, burn, and Uber-fast decks.
ornithopters, phyrexian walkers, phyrexian wall, and the artifact in 10th that gives you max handsize for 0 any artifact with 0 mana cost but mainly the creatures