I like the artifact feel of the deck. You should try to incorporate some tribal Myr aspects! There are a lot of good Myr cards in this set! http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=370925
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This deck doesn't have any comments until now. Ehh.. Kinda lame-sauce for being modern, but I see some cool old school cards like Ajani Goldmane and Felidar Sovereign. I would say make a standard version. Sincerely, Haisis :/
If it weren't for Garruk Relentless and Hinterland Harbor this deck would cost only $15.
Interesting deck... It would take a while for your deck to dish out some damage, but once you've set up your mana your set. The Main issue I would see is the fact it is 3 colored so getting out the mana you need would be a pain in the arse despite several Ponders and Multicolored mana. IDK how your deck would play. The control factor is strong, and most of the offensive is in the spells. A hexproof creature would be your biggest enemy and healing second. You have very little Battlefield presence. For the most part I see this deck winning. For the weaknesses your deck holds you should put strong Battlefield oriented creatures into the sideboard for certain types of aggro or token decks.
Overall I like the feel of the deck. It is extremely defensive! I like what your doing with the Stonehorn Dignitary and the Blade Slicer with the exiling. You can block the majority of spells with Mana Leak or eliminate any destructible threats with Day of Judgement. I would suggest incorporating Restoration Angel into this deck. Unfortunately It costs a lot of real life mana. It can eliminate the need for Lingering Souls with it's ability to fly while providing another option for your flickering strategy.
This deck wouldn't mill quick enough, focus on milling. Sleep, Mana Leak, Fog Bank, Elixer of Immorality should all be replace for millier cards.
Three colored decks are hard to make. As far as I can tell you are going for tokens. Green has very few token cards, Champion of Lambholt doesn't help to much for other tokens, only itself. Parallel Lives is an absolute must have if your going to use green in a token deck. Chandra, the Firebrand doesn't really help, If you want a planeswalker get Garruk Wildspeaker or even Garruk Relentless for their token giving effects. Along with those you would want stronger spells and enchantments. Search through white for good enchantments, and just find better spells to augment your vast army of tokens.
The deck seems like it would struggle for the first 5 turns. But after that your opponent would already have a set-up with whatever their strategy is. Since your deck has very little manipulation, other than potential mana ramping, it would leave you very vulnerable. Practically any blue, black, or red could easily manipulate any threatening creatures like Wolfir Silverheart or Elderscale Wurm against you. If you happened to get Revenge of the Hunted that would significantly damage the opponent but in most situations not enough to win you the match, I would suggest Increasing Savagery to make a permanent 5+/5+ on a creature and since you have a mana ramping deck could even get the flashback for a 10+/10+. I would suggest since you have a lot of tramples and the Predator Oozes to throw in Inquistor's Flail, which doubles combat damage that a creature deals and doubles the damage dealt to it. Then focus more on creature like the Dungrove Elder. Just give more focus to the mana ramping. If by the 4th turn you can get 6 or 7 mana you would be in great shape and if that happens you can throw down some devastating cards.