It's not focused enough... If you're goin for mass token drop, either pick a type of token to play with for synergies, or a way to use your tokens for effect. Also, the goat land is extremely slow, and the springjack isn't going to be effective with all that green. I'd drop them. The same with the artifacts, though that's just because they have no specific purpose in a token deck. Landfall can be very effective though, especially if you throw in some sac. lands and multi-drop land search spells. Harrow and Khalni-heart expedition would work nicely if you had enough landfall token droppers to make use of it all.
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Try throwing Chandra Ablaze in for some late game burninating. Also, your asensions will be targeted a lot.