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http://www.starcitygames.com/magic/multiplayer/19681_The_Kitchen_Table_345_The_Nether_Shadow_Primer.html
Just a few things there Tuck: You should really look into adding the following: Sol Ring Skullclamp Barter in Blood Diabolic Edict Sign in Blood Nights's Whisper Nirkana Revenant http://forums.mtgsalvation.com/showthread.php?t=161090 Look at the Black, Colorless and Land sections for some great EDH cards. I think once you see some of them you'll know what you need to take out. Never underestimate the beauty of card draw and mana acceleration in EDH, even at the cost of a few life. Also, in a deck where everything is going to end up in the graveyard the Skullclamp is so powerful. Nice start - should be a challenge to keep creatures around going against this one.
The Guard Gomazoa doesn't make any sense in this deck. If its simply a card you like and want to run in a deck, maybe something more control oriented.
Isn't this just a more specific Bazaar Trader + Immortal Coil type deck? All you have to add is a Bojuka Bog and game over.
Why not run Cunning Sparkmage instead of Cinder Pyromancer. They are the same mana cost, but have Haste instead of the untap ability.