I think you should revise this, perhaps add creatures to it that has the same effect. ΓΌ just an opinion. Feel free to look at my composed decks and make a comment. I'll be more than happy if you're going to give the negative side of my deck and its weaknesses.
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this deck is weak against, counter spells and creature spells like fast mana and fast creatures elf deck, also this is weak against life gain deck.
nice buildup deck here