2 less DoJ for conjurer's closet imo. Between Fiend Hunter, ORings and 2 DoJ you should have enough CC. Looks like a fun deck.
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Needs more singletons and 4 more lands. >.> Ok seriously though, I don't like the alabastors that much. You can't really afford to pay the lifelink cost and cast a creature early game and late game shouldn't happen. You just die horribly in late game. I would consider some fiend hunters to replace, or choose your favorite creature at the same mana cost if you want to keep the same really 2 heavy mana cost. If you feel you need the life gain, I would recommend Suture Priest. That way you can deal a bit of damage, gain a bit of life and not need to activate an ability.
Hilarious.