parallel lives is to slow having no effect on board till next turn. i like the doomed traveler and blood artist though make them 4 of drop the other creatures add selesnya charms and tragic slips for versatility so those turn 3 rancored smiters dont wreck ur face or. id put vraska as a SB and main Garruk, Relentless. he shoots and control and can easily overrun late game. only 20 lands iffy add 2 vault of archangels or atleast 1 gavony, or a farseek to find the color you need. just to try and make it more consistent. thats all i can think of. good job on it. it's inspired me to try my own tokens. GL
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Not enough mana. i've been running a U/B control with the same amount of land hoping card draw would make up for the mana curve more often then not it hasnt i put in 3 more land and have had a better success rate.